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Pretty in Pink

Pretty in Pink


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Registration date : 2007-03-10

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PostSubject: Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism...   Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism... Icon_minitimeThu Mar 22, 2007 6:42 pm

Last Sunday, while sitting lonely during break time, I thought of doing something unusual... I thought of doing something I never used to do before... that is : watch the boys playing football! I've never really admired such a lovely view, but this one is rather animated... very animated!! That's why I wrote this poem, and that's why I called it : "Movement... Kinetic Energy... and Metabolism"

here it is:

As the bell goes, the sun shines brightly in their souls
As fast as light, they meet around their favorite old ball
Restless minds can't wait till the game would start
After dividing themselves into two, they suddenly run apart
It's movement... kinetic energy...metabolism...

Instantly, the faithful ball finds its way between their feet
with a smile, it quickly passes everyone, this is how it greets
being hit, passed on, flown in the air, smashed into a window
That is what it's made for, and the job it would gladly do
In this whole movement... kinetic energy... metabolism thing

Never standing still, jumping in the air, running from here to there
enthusiastic, burning with energy, and the excited expressions they wear
shouting, waving, and producing loud noises, not caring about other's criticism
They make a perfect animated scene, so indescribable, even for journalism
'Cause it's all movement... kinetic energy... and metabolism!

Things that couldn't be described by simple words or even a great poem!
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rana

rana


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Age : 34
Registration date : 2007-03-08

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PostSubject: Re: Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism...   Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism... Icon_minitimeThu Mar 22, 2007 6:47 pm

its really agreat poem and i think all boys will admire it...it describes them playing perfectly and i like the very first part which is
As the bell goes, the sun shines brightly in their souls
As fast as light, they meet around their favorite old ball
Restless minds can't wait till the game would start


keep it up..Smile and its title is the best
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Pretty in Pink

Pretty in Pink


Number of posts : 121
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PostSubject: Re: Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism...   Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism... Icon_minitimeThu Mar 22, 2007 6:49 pm

Thanks a lot ya rana Very Happy Hope they like it and hope they don't make fun of it!!
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Banhawy

Banhawy


Number of posts : 118
Age : 33
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PostSubject: Re: Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism...   Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism... Icon_minitimeThu Mar 22, 2007 9:27 pm

besr7a el kora 3omry mafarkt feeha keda
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Pretty in Pink

Pretty in Pink


Number of posts : 121
Age : 32
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PostSubject: Re: Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism...   Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism... Icon_minitimeThu Mar 22, 2007 9:29 pm

neither me wallahy... bas as I sat lonely... this was the only thing that grabbed my attention... watching the players!

Plz guyz tell me all ur opinions n whether u liked it or not. Cuz ur the players!!
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Banhawy

Banhawy


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PostSubject: Re: Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism...   Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism... Icon_minitimeThu Mar 22, 2007 9:31 pm

la2 heya gr8 peom...bas el subject attracted meeeeee
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L!L!koOo

L!L!koOo


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Age : 32
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PostSubject: Re: Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism...   Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism... Icon_minitimeFri Mar 23, 2007 1:42 am

its gr88 gal .... i luved it
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The key to hearts <3

The key to hearts <3


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PostSubject: Re: Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism...   Movement... Kinetic Energy... Metabolism... Icon_minitimeSat Apr 07, 2007 12:02 am

hey! i really liked the poem! keep up the gd work and show us more of it!
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