shadymokhtar
Number of posts : 27
Registration date : 2007-03-07
 |  Subject: FOR MY DESTINY I BOUND  Sun Apr 01, 2007 7:03 pm | |
| FOR MY DESTINY I BOUND
A lot of tears
A lot of fears
Coming from my heart
But stop in my eyes
Trying not to show
Not to let them flow
In a very long road
Filled with water, but i am still in the ford
Bounding for my destiny
With all my patiency
On nothing I look around
As I said "for my destiny I bound"
Holding my tears
Giving up for my fears
this is the worst
expressionless, targetless
it realy hurts
sometimes I find a toy in the road
that cheers me for a while
Maybe, a quarter of a mile
then it goes
and the mode returns
to that full of chaos
Noiseless-Crowdless
Nothing around
Expressionless-targetless
Face in the ground
With patiency-I'm searching
But my way is not found
Walking-Waiting
For my destiny I bound
Imagine the picture-Hard for a heart
Thats what it does sound | |
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Senior
Number of posts : 20
Registration date : 2007-03-19
| | Subject: Re: FOR MY DESTINY I BOUND Mon Apr 02, 2007 1:40 pm | |
| It sounds too frustrated shady. Don't say you're so hopeless, or can't find your way.  anyway, days pass, weeks pass, months pass and years do pass and you'll find that all your worries were about nothing.  why don't you try to write about these worries or thoughts and instead of holding your tears, let them flow and finish . . .  | |
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