Life today...it's..

Subject: Life today...it's.. Thu Mar 08, 2007 5:16 pm

A house but not a home
Care but not love
Reality but not truth
Giving without sacrifice
Fun lacking happiness
Company missing frienship
Close but not intimate
Expectations without motivation
Money with no value
parents but no families
Everything......but Nothing

Life is too short to waste it in fighting or hate..Life is about all doing good.it's all about loving people and always always SMILING.
life is about caring for others more than yourself.Life is about caring for people without bothering them:D

Live it right...and make a difference in others life ..don't be negative ....and when you do this...you 'll feel happy and satisfied.

give it a shot and start living right and always say to yoursrelf
"i matter"

Subject: Re: Life today...it's.. Thu Mar 08, 2007 10:14 pm

Nice shot
i realy like you poet
but somehow i think it is woulthless in this life no one has time to waste on such things
but anyway i realy wanna know
did you realy wrote this lovely piece of poetry or you just copied it?
if you wrote it maby you will be a poet in the future anyway yala salam

Subject: Not your poem? Sat Mar 10, 2007 5:33 pm

Assalamu 3alaikom:)

Hello dear friend...

I dunno who u r but I read ur post, only the poem but not the rest!
The poem is only enough to let me reply actually.
This was published in TeenStuff magazine, February 07 issue, so if it's not yours, it was gonna be better if u said it wasn't urs. It would be like ur quoting sumthing from a book or a mag or even somebody. People don't like somebody stealing their stuff and saying it's theirs, especially if were ideas or sumthing they wrung their minds in order to produce '

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Exclamation
If it's your poem, then it's OK.
Plz rethink about it.

Anyway, nice to know that sumbody appreciates poetry today!! Very Happy

Assalamu 3alaikom

Subject: Re: Life today...it's.. Sun Mar 11, 2007 7:04 am

hi,dear pretty in pink,

if you had read it all ,you would have got the point of writing such a thing which was puplished in a magazine that we all read.
the few lines after the poem where my comment to it ,and of course i can't comment on something without saying what it is.

another point, i'm not idiotic to refer somethin' io me while i know that the majority of people has read it or what do you think?!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

REread it all and you'll get the point of writing it
agree or disagree...it's up to you.
bye

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