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WAHEED

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PostSubject: The Day I Die   Thu Mar 08, 2007 8:28 pm

The Day I Die

I lived that day...I died at night
I prayed that day...hoping for light
I had one wish before i'm gone
God forgive me for what i've done
That day was great...my prayer was answered
In Heaven i was...In Heaven i landed
I woke up then..it's a dream i had
Now to God...i'm grateful for that
From that day...i still here live
And what i only want from God to forgive.

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Aloula

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Registration date : 2007-03-11

PostSubject: Re: The Day I Die   Sun Mar 11, 2007 3:07 am

nice man but its a bit short

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WAHEED

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PostSubject: Indeed   Sun Mar 11, 2007 3:24 am

thnks ma man, it's short i know, i wrote it while studyin' , but thnks veghy much alool, waitin for your poetry.. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: The Day I Die   Sun Mar 11, 2007 3:53 am

my poetry is full of pessimistic stuff and things people wouldnt like to read and i have 2 of them delivered in songs one of them is called for you and the other trust in the impostor and we have other songs with wonderful lyrics ill post these stuff very soon but i cant post trust in the impostor because its full of agnostic stuff that cant be seen by school students

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PostSubject: Re: The Day I Die   Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:45 pm

el poem to7fa ya wa7eed ,go on write more........lol!
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